Focus Group

After taking in the feedback it is evident that there is still a lot of work to do before the editing process begins. The main issues were mainly about the sense of realism of the acting and how they reflect certain characters. To solve this there should be more diegetic discussion between the doctor and his patient to increase our sympathy for the patient as a result of the doctor's suspicious persistence. More conversation between the two would also make the storyline clearer- it was suggested that parts of the conversation should refer to the visions as they play on screen.